Eyes in a Room
by JP Leddy
Eyes across a room
meet
Heart pounding hard
connection
Body temperature rises
attraction
Time simply stops
desire
Music pulsates loudly
want
Day’s worries forgotten
bliss
Crowd blocks view
upset
Crowd clears away
lost
Eyes turn downward
tears
Poem has been submitted to Thursday Poets Rally Week 34 (December 2-8)
* I nominate Drew for the The Perfect Poet Award for Week 35
Thank you for the following Perfect Poet Award for Rally Week 34 and I feel honored to be counted with my fellow peer awardees.
I would also like to thank our Poet Leader Jingle for the following Participation Awards for Thursday Poets Rally Week 34
The Most Far-Sighted Poet Award
The Most Soulful Poet Award
Lovely Blogger Award
The Merriest Poet Award
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amazing eyes view…
vivid and elegantly done…
thanks for the support.
have fun!
perfect poets week 34 posted for you.
I appreciate the support, Ji!
Very beautiful imagination..
Take a look on my poetry..
http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/11/25/depths-of-my-heart
ash,
Thank you! I will read your poem, too.
JP
you reminded me of how much I suck at dancing! sad. Nice piece.
Here is mine:
http://ukeepwalkingforward.wordpress.com/2010/11/30/little-deaths/
LOL@Drew!
JP
Beautifully expressed release of pent up feeling.
Well said.
Thank you, Dr Goyal!
JP
Wonderful poem. Love the transition from one emotion to another
Thanks, deadpoet!
JP
A great write! I loved the emotional gamut is expressed
Appreciate the comment, A.B.
JP
emotions from measured from one point to another….good write
Nice!!!
http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/05/rhythms-of-the-heart/
Love and loss at the speed of disco. A shared feeling.
Great transition of emotions…..this makes me want to go to the dance floor right now
Loved it. There is a solid rhythm to it, a punctuation feel
Very intense poem. Wonderful in the emotion and anticipation throughout. Truly brilliant!
A poem everyone can relate to! Well done!
Haha!…I like this one!! Simple and apt for partaay!! =]
nice piece
Thanks, Chamz! Appreciate your feedback!
JP
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I like the brevity and the contrasting print. Both improve effectiveness of the work.
Thanks for your very kind comments on http://shawnbird.com/2010/12/03/night-warmth/ I appreciate your visit! I’m glad your breath was stolen!
Thank you Shawn!
JP
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Thanks for accepting these awards.
well deserved.
Happy Tuesday!
vote if you can , referring to the pingback on top of the comment,
due to the number of poets in the list, I would not further request you to vote,
the deadline is December 22, yet, it is good to get the voting done as soon as possible.
Will do, Ji!
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